Great set of words used. I like the short verses that said so much. I'm so envy of you, 'cause I can't seem to write a poem with verses that's short! lol. I hope you're not feeling this way now. :)

Excellent
deep
intense
5/5
love
amy

I liked this, it was short and everything but it said a lot, i really like your style 5/5

That is a wonderful poem...iof its tru i kno exatrly how u feel. u def. deserve a 5/5! keep up the gr8 work!
~*Who Cares?*~

Hey, i loved this poem also. very well written and very strong-willed. one question, sorry if i'm being nosy, but are you goth?
-Suzie

Yet another beautiful penned, oh marvellous! though sad but express so beautiful emotions.... sometimes life's isnt great, anyway, beautiful done....and thank you so much for your nice comment, i very appreciated! take care.