Omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg lolz. that poem is so sad, im freaken cryin rite now..its relle good..keep up da good work

xoxoo
dINaA

Great poem. It made me cry, cuz I can relate so well with how you are feeling about your dad. I never met my dad, but I pray and wish for him to come home. 5/5
~*Amber*~

Aaahw. =( can really relate to the feelings you have for your father, mine is gone too. love the poem! Read and comment some of mine xx A.

I like all the others on here relate to where your comin from. but i knew my dad but he left and he never had a kind word to say to me when he was around. but great job u have a talent for drawing the reader in and making them feel just how u do..your very talented keep it up.

This is touching