Wow...how dark and spooky but beuatifully written! keep it up!:)
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plz c/r mine too..thanx!

Wow... I don't even know what to say. This is an amazing poem, you did an excellent job. Keep writing, because you're poems are brilliant. =)

I F-ING loved cant wait 4 more

Hey man, u've been one of my faves for a while, and I just thought it was about time I commented on your poems. This is really, really good. Nice word choice, interesting and brilliant symbolism. your flow couldn't be better, and you rhyming is strong. Brilliant Job. WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE MORE?????? lol.

Andrew

Hey this is andy's mate Al. loved your poem man, its got good rythmn and rhyme. Andy recommended you and i'm glad he did.