Thank You

Short and sweet detailed enough to send the importance of the person.

however the "In it" all by itself on a line seemed akward at first but thinking back it works well but when i read it i just confused me because i missed what "it" (life) was

the Thank You at the end was a interesting ending normally something so short doesn't close very well but i loved this ending

I love this poem, it shows so much emotion, so much feeling and it is so sweet.
Keep up the good work
Tara xxx

That's a really nice loving poem!! 5
-Kristin