Short and snappy. a very quick poem with plenty of emotion. the last line in particluer works beautifuly. great work, and hang in there

Ruby

This was good it was short, i think it was definatly more of a rant then anything else, your rhyming was verrry simple words like be and see me and be...that kinda thing went on a lot in this poem...sometimes you rhymed other times you didn't so it was kinda messy i loved the ending it was my favorite part they were the best rhymed words out of the whole thing and it just sounded really nice so 4/5 good job

This was good it was short, i think it was definatly more of a rant then anything else, your rhyming was verrry simple words like be and see me and be...that kinda thing went on a lot in this poem...sometimes you rhymed other times you didn't so it was kinda messy i loved the ending it was my favorite part they were the best rhymed words out of the whole thing and it just sounded really nice so 4/5 good job

Many times this happens. Don't let it get you down! Become stronger from it! And, most importantly, learn from these kind of relationships. 5/5!

Hugs,

Michelle