by ~*~MoNiQuE~*~ Nov 2, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Everyone needs that secluded place where they belong, |
by Larry
Good job! You can do better! Try to make sure you keep the same amount of syllables in each sentence that rhymes with the next! Verses should be approximately the same length and having the same amount syllables allow your poetry to flow from the tongue |