Another Loss

by morbid_tears   Nov 2, 2005


The world has collapsed
Into my shadowy grave
The roses dead in my Bone fingers
Lie brittle and broke
Above the grave
I hear muffled cries
And shrieks of pain
Leaving my wounded mother's mouth
The ground drenched for the rain
Is not just absorbing her tears
But also taking in her worst fear
Her daughter dead in a casket
From a shot to the head
The crimson blood splattered
All around the once spotless room
My mother having to endure all of this
Having to see me lying on the floor lifeless
With a pistol in my hand
And a bullet hole through my head
She'll never know why
I committed the the perfect sin
And decided to take my life
For I left no note good-bye
To explain my escape of the pain in this world
And I've become another statistic
Another teen lost to a world of suicide

~*Amber*~

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  • 19 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow this is incredible! really powerful, and the wording was so perfect! 5/5
    emma xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Emotionless Riot

    It is my favourite I did. :-D

  • 19 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Very good. i definetly could relate. it's a nice piece of work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Joey Matthews

    Who ever voted this as a 1 needs kicking. Very touching piece of poetry!

    i hope some people will vote for this, in my eyes its well worth the 5

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