Off I Go

by Italian Stallion   Nov 2, 2005


I have to go
to a land far off
I'll be flying from up above
it'll be tough
but I think I can handle

up up way I go
flying to death ahead
over there to Iraq I go
flying to death row ahead

it'll be tough
but I think I can handle
there's no beach
not even my sandals
but once again, I think I can handle

~Plz comment and tell me what you think.~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wat i think is that this is a gr8 poem. lots of emmotion and very sad. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great job loved it 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem, keep writing and take care sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey! This is quite a good poem actually. I really really liked it. You brought in a real life situation and worded it quite well. With a good reptitious value aswell. You have no complaints from me. Great job! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by kalyn marie

    WOAH Great poem and thanks for ur comments Italianas Rock 4 sure! b careful wherever Go. Good luck but most of all keep the big man in ur heart! ~kay~ keep it upp!

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