by sarahAnn
Great I think that is awesome to be supporting your country!!! |
U better be careful or i'm going to die!! becareful and remember everyone wants u to come back! |
by Juls
JOE PLEASE DONT GO. I know u have to so thank you for serving our country and that truly comes from the heart. Putting urself in danger for the whole Us...ur my hero. U read my poem bout Men over-seas and I just hoped u like it. I'll miss you when you go and I want to hear from u while u r over there. Luv ya and be safe when u r there hun!! |
Wow hun great poem short but to the point i liked it and good luck loves ya xxxxxxxxxxxx |
Omgg joe!! it was really! good luck in Iraq i kno somebody over there alreadyy....good luck ur a great writer keep it upp...and i excpect somemore poems when u come bac. be safe *huggs* |
by JL
Great job. i love the flow and style. good luck and take care in Iraq. XXXXX |
by kalyn marie
WOAH Great poem and thanks for ur comments Italianas Rock 4 sure! b careful wherever Go. Good luck but most of all keep the big man in ur heart! ~kay~ keep it upp! |
by Void
Hey! This is quite a good poem actually. I really really liked it. You brought in a real life situation and worded it quite well. With a good reptitious value aswell. You have no complaints from me. Great job! 5/5 |
by sarah
Great poem, keep writing and take care sarah x |
by Fallen~Tears
Great job loved it 5/5 |
Wat i think is that this is a gr8 poem. lots of emmotion and very sad. 5/5 |