Aw what a beautifully touching poem. I think it may fit more in the love section, but then again you're more likely to get genuine votes and comments in this section.
A very lovely thought you have put into this poem. It relates to me because on the very first night I met my Fiance I saw a bright star next to the moon, and I looked up and prayed that night would never end. Now look we're still together, so it proves your poem can be true.
The only suggestion is have is to capitalise every "I" in your poem, this will neaten it up a little. Thanks for sharing, keep it up.