I know your pain.

Omg this poem is awesome!! Its great! good job getting it all to ryhme!..i have trouble with that sometimes haha..thanks for commenting on my poem!!and im sorry if this is what your realy going through...

That...was so wonderful, but so sad. I almost cried and that's saying something for me.

Wow amazing poem im really sorry if this is true no one deserves to b put through this ...take care

I'm so sorry! is this really happening? i dont kno who ur writing about but you need help ok so i dont kno u and u dont kno me but u need t go to the police i can tell u r hurting real bad and the pain will end if only the police kno. this just might be a poem that u made up but if it is real u need to break away. go to the police...i'm worried bout u!! plz write back to me

I'm so sorry! is this really happening? i dont kno who ur writing about but you need help ok so i dont kno u and u dont kno me but u need t go to the police i can tell u r hurting real bad and the pain will end if only the police kno. this just might be a poem that u made up but if it is real u need to break away. go to the police...i'm worried bout u!! plz write back to me

It was very good and deep. if this is wat you go thru then im soooo srry. take care and good luck.

Very nice poem! It's so sad thought =(
Good job, keep it up!

This was...shocking good
but hey,if this is really true than i´m soo sry, I know that doesn´t help you much....take care!!and talk with somebody about that...!!

I really like the poem! But would you consider using capital 'I's?

Ahhhh! Very good! I like the expressionism in this poem. I also liked how you said you and the wall were becomming such good friends =p

I hope this isn't true with all my heart. I know it isn't fun =\

Keep it up