Good beginning, maybe expand it with some imagery or something or maybe make it and ironic poem? anyways wonderful, thankyou for the comment it meant so much:)

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Jenn

I like this 1 alot....it makes me think back to when I was in school..(by the way I have been out almost 10 years) and I dont think it will ever change.... My daughter gets made fun of ALL the time by one of her "so called" friend... So, I told my daughter, hey you know what, tell her what u think... let her hear from you, dont b scared..... 5/5

Dat iz xactli wat happened 2 me at my old skool.....but then i changed skools.it sux 2 b discriminated 4 who u r. tell all tha losers who r tite 2 u 2 go screw them selves and get a life