Your a great write and a deep write too.
keep writing cause youll become famouse once.

That poem really went to heart! u always seem 2 write exactly how i feel...i loved every word coz every word told a story!but even tho i dont no u i would care very much if u died coz u feel in many a like ways that i do!if u choose death as an answer its totaly up 2 u!but u should no that there are ppl who care that just have a funny way of showing it!i really loved the end i no exactly how u feel!if only he new who i was!I REALLY LOVED IT!!!keep shining!and Alma is right ur poems are so gd u will be famous 1day by telling th world how u feel in ur writting! ...jose....

That wuz a very toughing poem keep up your good work