by Whitney Nov 3, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Your eyes tell a story |
Hmm...now that was a little different. That was okay but the third stanza kinda threw the rythym off. But the words were cool. |
Thank you for the comment on mine and that how i feal when my friends are not around it feals like there not there and i dont seem to care but ohh well mabey i am reading to deep into them |
Loved it as alowys |