Comments : Smiling when i die.....

  • 18 years ago

    by teyateys

    It's really depressing, s0metimes i feel the same way..anyway just keep writing ^_^ i'll give ya 5/5.
    take care luv yah - tHea

  • 18 years ago

    by .::BrokenHrt::.

    I think this is a really good poem...it kinda made me sad because i can really relate...all i wish is that i cud go bak in time to wen i was happy and nothing will ever be the same....great writing i really liked it...5/5 xoxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Joy

    Man thats touching ....your writing is underappreciated ...good work keep it up...xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTearDropxX

    Your poem ROCKS!!!!!!! its so amasing