I cant pick a favourite now
Damn it
They're all excellent poems
But one thing dam is spelt damn
lol sorry have to get you back
It was so good

Brilliantly wriiten. this is dark, really dark. every verse links to the other, perfect. please continue writing!

I like this one. probably more so than the otehr two i've read so far (scrolling down). it's very informative of your opinions and emotions. he he he nice worka again
-Suzie

By the way I want you to know you are always wanted in my heart and soul
I love you probably more then you know
dont forget that or me. . . .

This is a comment

Thankyou for your time
Matt

I dont think i fully understood that poem at first so obviously i have read it again thrice times
i know the feeling and Im there for you if you need to talk please dont feel this way on your own
let me in and i can help
i love YOU
so you are accepted your accepted with me thats if youll have me. . .
I loved it

Thats great. ALL YOUR POEMS ARE GREAT DAMNIT!!! lol, I wish I could write like you. Or alot of people too. But you have your own little way of unique writing. I love it. If I had a big vocabulary, I'm sure my poems would be better. But 5/5, its awsome. I loved it!

I have read this poem several times, and yet haven't commented. I keep coming back to the last lines: "For once I've been accepted,
I've been chosen by the dark." they are very powerful and resonate deeply with emotion.
*VioletRaven*

Not bad, i liked
I'm done with being what I am,
I've had more than I can take,
I will have no redemption,
What difference will it make?
but some of your rhymes where really simple. Other than that. 5/5

Powerful. As always. 5/5

RLS