by chavii Nov 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A beautiful bright day , a young mother was busy choosing toy for her Little boy in a crowded market. |
by Sourav
I just read this poem of yours... It's really very touching... You've wriiten it so nicely... But wondering... Have you stopped writing? |
by Just Wishes
A very touching poem it reminded me of a poem read long ago about a mom who was looking 4 her daughter who insisted to play out . later mom found her kid killed by blast and found her new shoes ..don know but ure poem relates to it in a way.anyhow, u have a a very special talent dear. |
by Riffy
This was really good. The way you worded it made it really sad, and the last sentence was so powerful. Hope the victims can rest in peace x |
by shobhana kumar
Beautiful, sad and so true of what happens when war overpowers love. |
by stephyG
Hey great poem.. thw words r really fantastic and i love da way its written!! well done..Stephy :) |