I feel so sorry for the victims of the bomb blast...hope their souls rest in peace....nice poem..take care...

Yes...i too wish for their souls to rest in peace.... wonderful poem... very touching... It's a shame that such people are having to go through this.....

Love,
Ipsita

Hi chavi
oh! even i wish that their soul gets peace. very touching poem.

Hey great poem.. thw words r really fantastic and i love da way its written!! well done..Stephy :)

Beautiful, sad and so true of what happens when war overpowers love.

nicely said, chavi

This was really good. The way you worded it made it really sad, and the last sentence was so powerful. Hope the victims can rest in peace x

A very touching poem it reminded me of a poem read long ago about a mom who was looking 4 her daughter who insisted to play out . later mom found her kid killed by blast and found her new shoes ..don know but ure poem relates to it in a way.anyhow, u have a a very special talent dear.
all the bestttttttttt

I just read this poem of yours... It's really very touching... You've wriiten it so nicely... But wondering... Have you stopped writing?