The girl is most of us around here...I don't think I'm one of them...hope you are okey...anwway...nice poem...did you wrote it today...if you did...what happen?

Wow.... some how hot running emotions seem to bring the best poems to our mind.
well done
stay strong
Laura
XxX

Wow nice job keep it up

Very sad piece :(

well written, rhymed very nicely...

keep 'em coming!

That was very interesting and I really liked it. The rhyming worked for it.
~The Unforgiven

Hey! Wow, I loved this poem because I can really relate to it! Good job, it's really well written! 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . .

Aww beautiful poem hun, but so sad. Your style is so unique, you make your poems always so intresting and even when you write about something like death, like this, your poem still seems to be different from everyone elses. excellent 5/5

I love this! Don't go and kill yourself please! You are too good of a writer to be lost to suicide!

That is deep. I like it a lot... it has much feeling to it

Wow, this is really good, I haven’t had time to read poems lately, I’m glad I got on and read yours its really good,! keep it up, this made me cry . hugs-hayley

I loved this poem. if i had been anywhere but here (in a computerroom at college) i would have cried, as it is i managed to stop myself.

its a very powerful and emotional poem.

Me and all the people im my IT class aggee that this is one of the most amazing poems weve ever read

hope ur ok

Wow Sabrina, that's deep. It's so sad. I love the way it flows together so well. Great job... 5/5

~ Tina

Aww...this was soo sad..i love this poem because it deals with me so much...but you don't deserve to be hurting, hun. take care and pls dont do anything...cos PEOPLE DO CARE...even if ut hink they dont!

Wow Wow Wow words cant explain how great that poem was it was very sad to

I think you are a really good writer and i think you should keep it up. and i hope your not as lost as this poem states

Oh hun, you ok? Luv u loads. Hugs :)

Wow...so unrealistically real. Incredible. No other words for this...
Much Love,
Jordan

Wow, I can really relate to this one. I love how you repeated the first stanza as the last one. Great job. 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

OMG! w/e u do dun kill urself! every1 has sumthin 2 lose...just think about how sad ur family wood b. n if u think they woodnt, well, i wood. i LUV ur work SOOOO much, and i am addin ur 2 my favorites! omg u are good! 5/5 4 sure! oh btw thnx 4 commentin on my post i appreciate it!
~*Who Cares?*~