Don't Give Up - 03/11/2005

by im ur AdDiCtiOn   Nov 3, 2005


Don't Give Up,
You told me you reached for the gun,
But where does that leave me?
Don't give up Hun.

Life can be better,
Just have a little faith,
If you need time to clear your mind,
Go ahead but don't be the eighth.

I know people love you,
Just don't hurt them,
And leave us with more pain,
Remember any friend of mine is a beautiful gem.

On the 1st of April,
I lost my first,
Chelsea,
Am I cursed?

On the 15th of August,
I lost my second,
Connie,
"It's over I hate it" thats what she reckon.

Now I sit here,
Listing to you telling me,
Over and over, not listing to me,
That you had the gun, wanting me to understand, don't, you see.

Theres so much out there,
Don't give up, we care,
Don't leave me with a third this year,
Don't you dare.

Dedicated to Neil

©Elisha L. Brain

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  • 19 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Thats a great poem.

    hope everythings ok

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Awwww, I know how you feel hun. I hope Neil doesn't go through anything like that. I know him too and he's my friend and I know that I would also be sad if he died. Well, great poem! Keep it up!

    ~BJ~

  • 19 years ago

    by Neil

    Thank you lisha i appriciate it ... its just sumtimes der r things i cannot stop ... sumtimes dis things r da worst... im sorry 4 da tears ive caused i do try my best 2 leave last nite over 6 ppol tried 2 stop me ... i cooled down ... jus like always ... but i myt reach a point wer i cant cool down n i pray dat wont happen...

  • 19 years ago

    by Lithium

    Aww hunni *hugs4U* i hope eberything turns out ok xox always rc