I sometimes feel like I want to kill some people that just don't "get a clue" about what's going on in my life. But; yet, I know I'm not that kind of person, to hurt someone, EVER! I always tend to hurt myself, if anyone, is hurt in the end, it's me... Whether, its me hurting myself, or them, hurting me forever... I just at time, cannot take all the pain...ya know? I know how you feel deeply.... Always will... No matter what. Will be here to listen, if you need somone to. Great poem. Well written. Very well expressed. Thanks for sharing. :O)

(((((big hugs)))))

Michelle

Wow...brilliant!!! so deep and dark. i love it!! you're very talented.

" may be your biggest regret,
but you are my favourite mistake."

i love that verse. keep it up!
-xXx-

Whoa...is this -my- Darien speaking of murdering his beloved like so?

Again, I dislike the fact that it didn't rhymed, but still...you manage to changed my view on the poem with yur words and how you used it to weave such a spendid scene.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

This poem kicks ass..!!

This poem is great, so deep and dark, well done on it

Wow,,,emotion well shown

Brilliant! I loved the word choice! I'm going to go read some more :)

Brilliant but scary eh? I liked it and alot of emotion in that one! it's very different to what i'd usually read definately still 5! :)

The first verse of this poem was for me the best. really enjoyed reading

Dark. Definitely in the right category.

Cheers to another awesome write. :)

Wow, that has so much emotion in it!!
**LISA**

Wow. I just read A LOT of your and I have to say, you are REALLY good! I added you to my favorites list. This poem is good and very powerful. Its sad too. . *