Wow its beautitful. i love it great job.

thanks for the comment:)

5/5 great poem and keep it up ^_^

Once again Bill, an amazing write. I loved the way this piece came together; adding nature to it was brilliant. I have to say; I think this is one of my favorites of yours. You’re definitely have a knack for writing love poems, I look forward to reading more. Take Care my friend. Brooke~

WoW! Great job! This seems to be a deep yet meaningful poem! I LOVE it! Keep up the great work! I'm looking foreward to more of your poems!
~Sammy

Bill- This one was beautifully written. It draws you in right from the beginning & keeps you there until it is done. I hope this lady knows how lucky she is to have a man so devoted to her.
Take care & God bless

Wonderful Bill, excellent, exquisite!!!