by Erika Nov 3, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
He sits on the merry-go-round., |
Good write, liked it all the way through. The pronoun references became a little too much to handle. I think it was from constantly using the same ones. the only other things are that it is spelled life and merry-go-round. I liked it nice job. |
by ScarletHaze
5/5 hun i seriously like this xox |