Comments : I feel her cry

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Oooh, I'm loving the mystery in this. It's very effective!
    I absolutely adore these lines:

    "And it looks as if the clouds were
    forecasting over her sky blue eyes"

    and

    "as if i knew each waking moment of
    her mind reflecting through her tears ..."

    So well written, keep it up~Holly