by xEmmax
Awwww really sad poem, but great descriptions, full of meaning. take care xxx |
by Ariana
I love this, the short lines make it more effective, and I really liked how you added the little rhyme, 'the angel is crying, dying.' Really nice work here. |
Your poems are short just like mine!!! Even though they are short you still seem to get your point across. Great job hun.. |