Comments : Innocence

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Awwww really sad poem, but great descriptions, full of meaning. take care xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I love this, the short lines make it more effective, and I really liked how you added the little rhyme, 'the angel is crying, dying.' Really nice work here.

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Your poems are short just like mine!!! Even though they are short you still seem to get your point across. Great job hun..
    !^I Love Being In Love^!