Silver ,

The flow in this poem flowed as gracefully as a waterfall ...
Beautiful and breathtaking words ..
Each stanza just keeps getting better and better ...Beautiful ...

Extremely consistent -- great sentence structure and stanzas -- great consistency with your amount of syllables and what sentences rhymed in each stanza in which sentences did not. However, consider proper punctuation

This poem is beautiful. All your poems are.
i was wondering if you could comment on my 3 latest poems? as ive realised you give extremely good advise! if you leave the names of any three poems you would like me to rate and comment, i would be more than happy to do so! jesxx

This poem was well written and has a good rhythme running througout the entire thing. It has a good rhyme scheme too.