by Little Dot Nov 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I see him talking to her |
by Darien
Ohhh man, I can so relate to this poem. Just read any of my stuff, and we are so alike. haha, awesome job :) |
I think you could make it longer to portray the hurt a little better, but so far, I like it. Good job and keep up the good work! |
by Michelle
Very well expressed. Thanks for sharing! :o) |