Someone gave this a 3 with no comment so i figured i'd tell you why...this really isn't much of a poem...one of the most descriptive words you used was fake, so not a very good vocab at all, i know this is probably just a rant, but i think this one was best left in a journal but i think you could have developed an idea off this because the message you got across very bluntly is a pretty neat poem idea, i'd like to see a real poem made out of this but yeah that's why this got a 3 already