Well.. you wrote it down beautifully. And it's so true.. I guess its what keeps us little ones alive. Excellent.

Definately have to agree with this one. It is always the little things that keep me going and they just about covered them for me! Thanks for a great read and take care, Tess xoxo

I think this poem is very deep.. ty for sharing.

It is kind of sad hun but if its what keeps you going its what keeps you going ya know xox

That's not simple...that was very creative. I liked it a lot. There's truth in what you say. I know when I was younger my eithteenth birthday was all I needed to make me happy. I could leave the house and do what I wanted. HAHA Yeah that was a joke. lol Nicely done...a different way of looking at life I guess...

Wow so true again hun. I also do the same thing..i wish i just had a dream, a goal...anything...
great again xoxo

I love your poetry! your writing style is so original and awesome, i love the way you analyze and connect things. very interesting.

Another excellent poem! It is amazing and very deep again. I love you're poetry!
~Sammy

Very effective poem