You are really good, the flow was weird but once I got the rhythm of it down it flows really well actually, but yeah this was a really good poem i think i'll probably add you to my favorites

I know I failed when you succeeded,
You left at the time you were needed,
Holding your head high in the air,
When all I needed was loving care.

that was my favorite part, good job

This is an amazing poem, i love the way you structure your words.
your poem has alot of meaning, thanks for sharing your talent

"It's a little girl you see, she fell apart,
In her hand holding her bleeding heart."

beautiful, fantastic use of words. i really like this poem

This poem is so expressive and meaningful... It provides so much insight and inspiration, as do your othe peices of literature. So much help with so many problems in my life... Thank you for writing it so that I could find it and read it... Thank you, you've helped me...

Josh

Another amazing poem girl...never stop writing you're a great writer

You are right! This poem is beautiful! My poem 'Tears of Red' has a kind of connection. You express your feelings so deply in this poem, it is amazing. You have a wonderful way with word and can weave them into something as heartful as this. Please! Kepp writing your poems, they are fantastic!
Lots of love

Mona,
This has to be oe of the best poems i have ever read.They way you have written it is amazing!! Your poems really inspire me and i wish that one day i might be able to write poems as good as yours. The feelings, emotions, about this poem are so....so GOOD!! well done once again for an amazing piece of poetry.
Rosie xXx

Hey me again, sorry it's taking me so much time to make it through all of them, very good, i loe the words you used...

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Hahahahahaha, awesome job.

I have no clue what to say..good work.

Stand up tonight.