by Love Fallacy Nov 3, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Beautiful is your face, |
by Dreams
I like the repetitions you have there. It's keeps the poem going well. Also, how you change the repetitions and make it flow. Your creativity do soar well! |
by Tiffani
Awa!! this was an AmAzInG poem 5/5!!! and so sad, u are an awesome poet... keep em coming, |
by Leona
This is a great poem and you know I mean it when I am talking about a love poem cuz I dont really like love poems anyways good job and always keep it up!!!! |