This is a great poem and you know I mean it when I am talking about a love poem cuz I dont really like love poems anyways good job and always keep it up!!!!
Leona

Awa!! this was an AmAzInG poem 5/5!!! and so sad, u are an awesome poet... keep em coming,

Love, Tiffani

I like the repetitions you have there. It's keeps the poem going well. Also, how you change the repetitions and make it flow. Your creativity do soar well!