This is a true masterpiece...man...you are so good...wow...really amazes me...how did you write such a nice piece...haha...to tell you the truth...when you say it was long...I was planning to read it another time(because I'm out of time)...but I don't know why...your words caught my eyes...I fall in love with this poem...it's one of the best I've seen so far...and one of my fav....definitely a masterpiece...wow...I really love it...beautifully written...I really hope I can check out more...please forgive me...but I have to run now...I guess I'll check others later...

Thanks. =)

you're quite a good poet yourself.

Wow you are an amazing poet..wow!!
lol
this poem was so powerful...my jaw dropped after the first line.
Keep writing xoxoxoxox

Very well written poem, it was a pleasure to read it's intricately woven wisdom.

~Sherry~

Wow didnt expect such a deep poem. i love reading poems guys wrote, gives me hope that not all of them are jerks. but yes that poem was well writen and well thought out i liked the candle part with the wax dripping on the floor. i love it if this is ur newfound talent keep it going cos its working
-erin