Wow, this is so excellent. the first three lines

You have ignored me when I'm alone
You ignore me when I cry
Will you ignore me once I die?

That is awesome writing. I'm sorry you feel that way. It's hard to be suicidal, even crying for help and still getting nothing back. Try and stay strong for you and nobody else. xxx

DAM*! lol..i don't c how u can think that's not good, cuz that's GREAT! well, take care! n 5/5 all the way!