I fear we are done

by Marianne   Nov 3, 2005


We clicked from the start
it was the beginning of a great friendship
we told each other everything
we did what girls did, talked of boys...did hair and nails and every thing else
then i fell deep
i was so lost i couldn't breath
i was so lonely
i thought of death far to much
i excluded from everything and everyone but she was always there... till HE came into the picture
i have no one to go to
u don't care how i feel
u care about him
how would u feel if i killed myself???

i just wrote this just barely hope u like it (ha ha doubt it)
comment this poem plz!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by *hadduby*

    Well, Marianne...I for one don't think killing yourself is the answer, you have to realize that life is about you liking who you are not what anyone else thinks.Stand in your majesty and others will follow.

  • 19 years ago

    by lisa

    Good poem the same thing has happened to me a few times....trust me killing myself was so the answer to me..but dont u'll realize taht they arnt wort the pain and suffering

  • 19 years ago

    by BlACkxXxAnGEl

    Hey Marianne, great poem keep writing nd if u ever need 2 tlk to ne1 i am here 4 u!!!!!!!!!!!!