by Daniel Alexander Nov 4, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I watched as fire licked and raped the same five people you loved again and bit to the earth's core |
Amazing peice, very well written and expressed. |
by Jemma
Another wellw ritten thought provoking piece. i like the 'she laughed at me' line especially. Good Luck! |
by libby
I quite like this, very surreal and wonderful. I especially like "She laughed at me and so, fallen, I remove myself, never to kiss her tragedy or feel her cells". Great work. |