Wow that is fantastic, deep with meaningful, believable emotions. i have read so many poems about self harm online, and this one is the best by far. not falling into the 'im so depressed im gonna cut myself' realm, where meaning is skin deep and heartless, this poem conveys the truly distressing side of self harm.
all i can really say now is dont ever stop writing :)

I really liked this poem because it seems so true because of the language. Don't mean to nitpick but 'in to' can be written 'into'. That was all i could think to say other than the obvious fantastic keep writing etc etc so keep writing. I'm gonna read some more of your stuff as it is thought provoking.

Jemma