Woah, im speechless, that was really gripping, it made me shiver. excellent writing xxxxxxxxx

Hiya becky!!! omg this poem is sooo good... its like hard to explain but idk its weird i coudl immagine it... it felt soo real... well anyways i love u soo much!!!

Omg becky ur poem is amazing ur such a good writer i heart u!!

Fantasimagorical i.e ur excellent. I'll add ya 2 my favourites, that way i can be sure 2 keep reading. Thanks 4 checking out ma peom 'hope', glad u liked it. i'm not really religious either like i believe in god and all but yeh i suppose i wrote this peom because i sorta wish i was as hopeful and had as much faith as the girl in it, but yea i no wot u mean by not having faith, i don't have it either, lol another thing in common, and it's hard 2 achieve. anyway do u have msn or sumtink, lol it's so much easier 2 tlk on there, anyway ttyl
lots of love
eddi
xoxo

Omg this is SO good! wow, i LOVE THIS POEM/dream thing! wow....fabulous work...5/5 4 sure!!!

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