When in reality, you shattered my world
Built me up, just to let me fall.
I love these lines, I relate so well to them it actually makes me feel sad.

Beautiful...the form and the heart in it.

But...it sounds like you deserve someone who treats you better. It may have been real love, but that doesn't mean you were meant for each other. Just make sure he's worth waiting for...and is he waiting for you?

xxx

Truly amazing
youve been added to my favourites
In some ways our styles are similar
keep it up
its great
xxx

You're a truly amazing writer, I love your work. And I'm really picky on who to put on my favourites list, but I am glad to say that you are on there. I'm speechless.

This is a wonderful piece of writting... reading your pieces reminds me a lot of things that i have felt and your poems put lost memories and truths back into my memories... you are an amazing writter, keep it up, i love the read!

Great job, I bet a lot of people can relate to this poem.