Story of a girl

by ~Patiently Waiting~   Nov 4, 2005


Here comes a story of a girl,
To afraid to succeed in this world,
She has a boyfriend of two years,
A boyfriend the cause of too many tears.
She cries everynight because he hurts her so,
And she cant take feeling so low.
All she wants is a happy life,
A life without tears and with the hope of being a wife.
But this is too much and she doesnt understand the earth,
Shes been crying since the day of her birth.
No one can save her from the pain that she has,
Like no one else feels it the way that she does.
Her boyfriend is her world but she is nothing to him,
If only she could see maybe she would win.
This battle against life that she fights everyday,
Maybe her pain would just rush away.
Thats the story of a girl,
To afraid to take a risk in the world,
Sadly enough its the story of many more,
A normal story of a girl in a war.

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  • 19 years ago

    by DrowndingInFlame(Jocey)

    LOved it..it kinda sounds like me...but more like my friend her ex used to abuse her and she just told her friends and family that he did this.....so this poem reminds me of her..Great Write..Awsome...Daniel..Truly...All My Love..Joclyn(Jocey)

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Oh my god..so heart touching...god..no words can explain just how amazing you are...you're heart is just grand...

    (and dont laugh..un the pic i swear i was drunk:P)

    ttyl xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Yeah...it's what many girls is going through...although it's not neccessary a boyfriend of two years...but yeah...it's very nice...you always seem to feel what others feel...