Honey, this is a fantastic piece of writing! I would be looking to get this published... The only other thing I can say is WOW! Take care and please see some of my work, Tess xoxo

Yer it was good and all but please dont tell me my rhiming was forced because none of it was. allthose things i said in the poems were true, okay, and i really don't need you coming along and saying that. you've already said it in one poem do you have to say it in another? :-(