This aint peace

by ~Patiently Waiting~   Nov 4, 2005


Another great one of the world falls into another deep hole.
The young men of the world fighting over peace,
But we have to ask ourselves, how much peace can come out of this?
A young boy who only made the war because he faked his age,
Hits the ground in pain from a gun shot of a man with rage.
Thousands upon thousands died in world war two,
And years later we send troops over even after watching the news.
Families of the kids who made a decision to fight,
Cant do a thing because their leader thinks it is right.
How can we be killing a man with a daughter and a son?
How can we call this peaceful with the sound of guns?
Why do we fight countries when we arent even at peace with ourselves?
How on earth can we kill anybody else?
I dont believe what I see, this cant be life this is hell,
Throughout history, we been fighting, world war one and two,
No matter the death the message still doesnt get through.
Maybe world war three will stop these sins,
Or maybe after that we wont have a world to live in.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ali

    That is a really great poem. I agree with your points. If only more people could think this way.

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    I agree with jane!! so powerful and just really heartwrenching..because there's nothing we can really do...

    great poem...i really loved the last few lines..great ending to a spectacular poem.

    take care of urself xoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    WOW...That is so powerful...I really has nothing much to say about this...except it's one of your best...amazing as always...made me speechless everytime...