This is a really good poem. well done

'But no, I'm not like that at all,
So you can walk, I will crawl,'

This is my favourite part of the poem...
I don't see why you think your not as good as me...you're probably better
This has such flow and emotion in it and i can feel what you mean and thats what i love about reading your writing

i can't wait for the new friendship one you told me about awww and thanks for the comment it made me feel all warm inside and i felt love for once :D

thanks sweetie
take care keep it up
love ya loads kirsty xxxxxxxxx mwah

Wow you sound really angry on there, very good however

Awwwww!!!!!!! Lovely poem. Again, as they always say. "Never sink to ones level, rise above it"
Rosie xXx