Each stanza you would give off an expression that you intend on rhyming and then it didn't rhyme.

There were some parts in this poem that left me literally breathless. I had to stop, reread it, and sighed "aww"

Amazing, Darien.

Just amazing.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

It begins to make some sense now- as I read 'Faces of the moon part 3&4' before this. Its excellent and very well written- Im off to read the last bits! :)

Much Love and God bless-
FalLeN*-

P.S-
'All is lost on this night,
with the stars dim lights.
The moon did turn red,
like the blood in my veins'- I think there will always be aleast one stanza in your work that I'll really love ;) Very well written!

Great poem. It's very unique and I like the wordplay. Keep up the great work.

I loved it really great job keep up the good wrk

I do have to agree about the previous rhyme comments, but nonetheles si find this piece to be really unique and great. I love how you've divided it into sections and each one itself has a subtitle and it even goes with the idea of how the moon goes throuhg phases. Very well thought out. I also love how it keeps the continuous feel of the poem whilst the tone and ideas change as you go from one part to the other.

O My God! This is SO SPECIAL. Its sheer brillance I wanna write stuff like this.5++++++

I love all of the parts of faces of the moon...I know they are inspired by an album, but have you actually made them a song??? If not, you should.

Great real good, this kind of reminds me of my "Trouble" series, great job! Can't wait to read more!

Great piece! I like the way you partitioned it into 4 parts... Almost like the phases of the moon :)

Great work

I love how the 2 part are diffrent from each other that really kool and first time i had ever seen anyting like it nice job 5.5

I love it. . * I hope one day to as good as you. . .* maybe one day =D

A different p0em i think. very well written 0f c0urse. very well w0rded. amazing j0b. keep it up!!!
l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
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=D speechless my friend... you're so talented! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.... you're truly a great one! Hugs and take care!

:') Me cries happy tears while reading your poetry!