by AhmadAfaneh Nov 4, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A guy loved a girl living the next door |
by Samantha
I really liked this poem... it is beautiful and emotional.. the only suggestions i have for you is to watch your spelling.. there was a handful of misspelled words and also make sure if you want your poem to rhyme dont force it... let it come naturally... other than the the stroy was amazing and well thought out... keep it up... you are very talented and have me now very impressed... |
by Tammy
Amed- I loved this poem. Lots of emotion in this one. Good job. |
by lostlllsoul
Wow hunny.. |