Wow hunny..
this is such a beautiful poem..
its one of the best i've read.. its sooo good.. i love it..
much love.

Amed- I loved this poem. Lots of emotion in this one. Good job.
Take care

I really liked this poem... it is beautiful and emotional.. the only suggestions i have for you is to watch your spelling.. there was a handful of misspelled words and also make sure if you want your poem to rhyme dont force it... let it come naturally... other than the the stroy was amazing and well thought out... keep it up... you are very talented and have me now very impressed...

sammie