No more, daddy

by Ambar K   Nov 4, 2005


So you say Im suppose to stop
Well then why dont you help me?
Instead of being there for me
Why is that you are the one
Who makes me fall?
What did I do to you daddy?
All I did was Love you, or was it that
I depended on you
But was that wrong of me
Isnt that what I was suppose to do
But instead of helping me up when I fall
You put me in the hole even more
Fine daddy thank you for teaching me
That you cant depend on anyone in life
Because if the man who is to keep you safe
Is the one who harms you the most?
There is no hope in the world for anything!

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  • 18 years ago

    by NIKKI

    Wow this is really good....i can relate to it too....my dad puts me in the same possion...i hope things work out...it was very good....keep up the good work.5/5 oh and thanx for the commetns

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Hey dis was heel gwd...luved it..n im sori to abt wat happened.well i've ritin abt ma dad on how mch i hate him lol...check dem out if u can..der called To Me i got antho one but it aint dat gwd...well keep it up tc mwaz luv dia xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by BeeBeeGun

    Sad poem
    but written really well
    keep up the excellent work
    looking forward to more

  • 18 years ago

    by jocelyn

    Oh my god i love your poem i know what you feel i go theough the same with my dad please check out mine when you have the chance it's new

  • 18 years ago

    by Kalita

    Hey i love this poem oh my god i can relate to it really well thats kinda how my dad is although i don't really call him that anymore

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