That was EXTREMELY well written! I loved the last stanza, its so beautifully written and SO true. I enjoyed it also because it reminded me of a poem I wrote once, but this is like its counterpart as mine was much darker. Very impressive, I'll def. read more of your work.

Luanne, You're blessed with talent, girl....This piece is so beautiful and so True......Awesome job....I loved it...

Love Ann

*tear*...even if it wasn't that time a month,I think I'd still be crying when reading this...Luanne dear mom, I'm simply lost for words...I've never been this shocked after reading something...like seriously NEVER...in my heart I know I have so much to say about this poem, but i can't! All I know it was so beautiful and you had a terrific choice in words! The last stanza was a great way to to end it! You just blow me away everytime I read, but this, wow, this truly touched my heart...made me cry..*sniff, tear*..I love ya Luanne and now whenever I look at the sun, I know I'll think of you! Great write
your cyber daughter,
~Chelsey~

Wondeful, extremely well done, great job!!!

Awesome poem
~neens~