I think you could have used better words to express your feelings. It's a good topic to write of though.

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WoW! Great job! It is a deep and meaningful poem! I LOVE it! Keep up the great work! I'm looking foreward to more of your poems!
~Sammy

Awww i loved your poem i like alot of your poems they are really good keep it up check out some of my poems if you get the chance thx =)