Beautiful..... i really hope you make part 3.... dont leave me hanging!! i adore how your poems are little stories that make me want to hear more hahaa! xo adge

I really agree with adrian...this is beautifully written...and I would love to hear more...pretty scary though...lol...is the figure in white...hmm...a ghost? You have to continue this...I really want to know what happens next...you have to tell me when you do part three...this is totally AWESOME!!!

Good like they say.To bad I know how it ends but I want to see how you put it in words of what happenes next....good poem.

Nice poem, who's the figure wearing white; Mya or Lovely.

Can u read my poem plz. It the only one there.

Robert, that was a great poem. You really should make a part three. I loove your poetry, you write with such passon. Hope to read more darling.

-Jennifer.

Nice poem yuo know cant wait till you make part three. smile is rated a 3.9 now I dont know why or how. It pisses me off

There's a part 3?!?! I WANNA SEE IT!!
sory..really enthralled in this story...wana know wat happens:P
u're an awesome poet..xoxo

You need to make a part three even though matt already told me some of it, i still wanna know what happens

Anticipation.....lol, cant wait for th enext part, I know it'll be pwerful though! Few thoughs though....you might want to re-read this poem and fix some of your spelling mistakes. And thanks for teaching me how to spell "tragic", lol. Nevertheless, great poem.

Great poem i understand you keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome again!! ~did u notice that i say aweasome a lot?~ i cant wait to go and read pt. 3!! i love ur poems!!!